Tom's view on Q1-07 pitch

Lots of good ideas and a clear understanding of the genre. However you need to be more firm about the whole treatment. You have not specified anything clearly. i would work on a shot list and a new pitch that firms up your idea and puts accross a clear idea of structure to go with the look that you have decided on. YOu also need to explain how you are going to achieve this look.

You have put enough of your idea across to be awarded the contract to make the video for 'send in the boys' by Milburn